Detachment in male-female jargon. (Thesis statement). Blog post 8

The language utilized in the essays discussing masculinity (male-female relationships) are fraught with esoteric and often ambiguous word choice. Reading such sentences involving highly academic terms (theoretical segregation, stratification, social assimilation) sometimes leads to obtuse conclusions. The language is increasingly cerebral and increasingly self-conscious about how to convey an argument that never becomes clear because of the tangents the writers drop (whether inadvertently or deliberately). Since the language is highly critical, it kind of alienates people, making them view the whole intellectual reasoning as forced. It diminishes the message of the essay.